Discussion With Mr Canning About Our Video And How To Improve.

Today Me, Molly and Mr Canning sat down an discussed what we can do to improve on our video and came up with these points...

• The narrative build up was too long -Done
• Match the Tempo - When Harry opens the door add an effect to make his movements more distinctive. -Done
• Keep everything up to where chloe blows the candle out.- Done
• First 35 seconds need reworking - perhaps concentrate on Harrison performing. - Done
• Try switching the ending with the beginning - Done
• Include more of an verity of shots within the argument scene. - Done
• Be more creative slow parts up and speed some down. - Done
• Chop it up more. eg. gig scene
• Cut Harrison more into gig part 
• Stop the pit gig when music changes as it goes on for too long. - Done
• Make 2:46 onwards calmer - Done
• Fade the ending out
• Letter box editing perhaps swap around images to get more included within it. - Done

After this discussion we know we have a lot of work to do however don't know if any of it will work till we try it, however hopefully it will allowing us to improve our video.