Focus group on first video
person one's main comments: narrative is confusing at times; like letter boxing done but perhaps make the section chosen bigger so can see more of the fag being put out and perhaps lighten it so you can see more of what is going on; like the sped up scenes through london at night and going through the underground
person two's main comments: more of argument scene; shorten clips in pit gig to keep up with tempo of music; love how it starts and ends with chloe being upset.
person three's main comments: when fading harrison in, fully fade him in so you cant see so much of the date scene; really like the shot of harrison at the end where the camera goes from a stage light down to him singing on a block.
person four main comments: cut the pit rave in time with tempo; love the ending where chloe and harry are seen using a steady cam looking back on their relationship.
Person five main comments: like the fast cuts and drug scenes as well the feel of it being cheaply made as It fits to the steroeotypical way of looking at a conventional drum and bass music video.
Through these comments me and molly can now move on and improve more of our video to suit the target audience the most we can.
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